wow!!!!! I liked it how you have used lots of detail to paint a picture in my mind
cool Joshthis scrap blog is really detailednext time you could fix the spelling
Well done Joshua, you have gained the audiences interest by adding descriptive language, remember to check your spellind punctuation before you publish.Miss Paynter
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wow!!!!! I liked it how you have used lots of detail to paint a picture in my mind
cool Josh
this scrap blog is really detailed
next time you could fix the spelling
Well done Joshua, you have gained the audiences interest by adding descriptive language, remember to check your spellind punctuation before you publish.
Miss Paynter
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